Creepy poem/chant thing.

[Oxy]

I call it "HUMANARFDOOPFIR" because I can't think of anything else.

HUMANARFDOOPFIR
As we sit, patiently
In the office, where we will be
Repaired, repaired forever
Every night, one person leaves
For the cruel game
Of in-san-it-y!

One by one
They are all picked off!
Footsteps, footsteps
in the white hall,
echoing off the white walls
Tonight I will leave
I can hardly breathe
My time has come
To face the sun!


o3o How do you like it?

[Ɲoquisi]

Wow. That is creepy.... Did you make it up?

[Oxy]

I did o3o

Its about an asylum (mental hospital) where all the patients are killed. I'm feeling dark today.

[Ɲoquisi]

Yay! I have a couple creepy poems that aren't mine.... Ill make a thread.

[Sunny]

I'm not good a writing poetry, and I have a high respect for anyone that can make words rhyme and make sense at the same time. That's really good Lya, creepy, but good.

[Oxy]

8D thank you! Sweet's poetry is 10x better than mine :P

[Sunny]

So my sister stole my poem and re-wrote it. I'd be mad, but it's better than mine, so here it is:

Locked, locked, locked away,
Never to see the light of day.
Where, where, where?s the key?
The only thing to set you free?
Whisper, whisper, all alone,
No one?s here to hear you moan.

Find, find, find the song,
The one to let your life live on.
Taste, taste, taste the light,
Now spread your wings, prepare for flight.
Don?t, don?t think too hard,
Memories will leave you scarred.

Try, try, try to fly,
Ignore the haunting lullaby.
Fight, fight, ?til you?re free,
Now you control your destiny.
Fly, fly, fly away,
Ignite the fire of the day.

Gone, gone, where?s the song?
The one for life to sing along?
Break, break, break the spell,
Something only time can tell.
Never, never, never forget,
The one you owe your freedom debt.

Come, come back for one,
Before my final song is sung.
Sing, sing, sing the key,
Softly, sweetly just for me.
Lost, lost, lost no more,
Now there?s something to live for.

Back, back together again,
Just like paper meets the pen.
Locked, locked, locked away,
In my heart your song will stay.

[Ɲoquisi]

I love it! It sorta has a double meaning. Like, its creepy and cute at the same time.

[Sunny]

XD I was stuck for an ending, and i'm not emo enough to make it all depressing.

[Oxy]

I like it, IMO its better than mine.

[Sunny]

Everytime I read it I find more and more typos. . .

Thanks Lya & Noquisi ^_^.
what does IMO mean?

[Andraste]

1) i love creepy things... yeah i know im messed up, but its a great poem/chant thingy
2) its a great poem for a first try... (; no its a great poem, i cant make anything sad or creepy...

[Ahava]

'tis an office of vampires, no? x3 x3

[Thαnαtσs]

i love the poem/chant thingy!!!!! kinda reminds me of that movie...ehhhh...what was ittt??? the island or something like that.
i like sunnys too!!!!