Poem - Because Im bored :S

[sairento]

There comes a day when you'll take the rain away from the colourless sky.
My life is brighter. Everything is right.
But even though you will never see.
You'll never see the tears I hide behind my eyes.

There comes a day you'll say to me,
straighten up little soldier. Stiffen that upper lip. You've got me.
But no one else can see.
The preservation of the obscurity in thee.

I smile, I laugh, I walk off my pain.
You're driving me crazy. You're making me insane.
You care for nothing but your own emotions.
You live the life of luxury and fame.

When you left everything was perfect.
And if there was something wrong... Who would've guessed it?

This fails! I know. I'm still practicing.

[Andraste]

You suck! No just kidding, this is really good... And i somewhat hate you for it. -.-

[Sunny]

Jealousy isn't pretty Andraste. It's excellent, Sairento. I still have issues with poems that don't rhyme though

[Andraste]

Sorry....
But it was a great poem and the meaning rings true, the only thing i have to say would be the last line, kinda confused me. But that could just be me...

[Thαnαtσs]

I like it, though I agree with apricus xD